Pushout - Chapter 1 (pg16-56)
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I will be reading a book called Pushout, written by Monique W. Morris. This book talks about the criminalization of black girls in school. In one chapter, the texts are separated into several "mini-chapters" with different titles. For instance, in chapter one, several passages/ paragraphs were separated into eight mini-chapters. Throughout this book, I will be selecting a couple of sections from the chapters that I am reading and analyze them accordingly.
Bad Girls Do Cry
"Seventeen-year-old Portia grew up in the Bay Area foster care system. She was a larger girl in height and girth, and felt that her physical stature made her both a target and perpetrator of bullying (27)."
" 'I had on white shorts and a white shirt. We was at the park and it was muddy. We were playing by the creek, but I wouldn't go near [the water], so I was standing at the edge. And the teacher came behind me and pushed me... and I was the only Black kid in that class. And she didn't like me... She tried to make it seem like I tripped off the slope into the water and stuff.' (27)"
This section is where I first realized that Morris had approached several black female students in different schools, from different states across the country. The stories that she writes about throughout the chapter definitely pulls the readers' attention and makes it easier for them to understand what Morris is trying to explain. This also helps the readers to feel and understand how these students feel about their environment in school.
Ghettoized Opportunity
"Black women and girls in America are subjected to dormant assumptions about their sexuality, their "anger," or their "attitude." They have long understood that their way of engaging with the world- how they talk, how they walk, how they wear their hair, or how they hold their bodies- is subject to scrutiny, especially by those in positions of relative power (35)."
I personally thought that this was easy to relate to today's society. This particular passage from this section talks about how other races view Black women by their actions, the way they dress, the way they communicate with others, and even the way they walk. We often witness such situations in public and even on social media. Morris used pathos to appeal to the readers by approaching them in an emotional way. It is easy for people to judge others on how they dress and talk. Most people do. Humans are prone to judge others if they are different from themselves. I thought this particular passage clearly showed the reality of our society and how most people judge others who are different.
Believing the Hype
" 'I feel like... because there are so [few] Black people on campus... I've noticed that other races get more, like, special attention in class,' Destiny said. 'Like, if they're struggling or like, if they want to see the teacher after class, I noticed that the teacher will be more willing to help them after class.' (39)
I thought this passage links with the passage in the second section. It shows the reality of schools in other states. As a student who moved from North Carolina, compared to my old school, I have noticed that New Hampshire does not have this issue as much as North Carolina. Reason being, personally thinking, because the population of African Americans in this state is very low. It may be harder for some people who live in states like New Hampshire to see these kinds of issues in schools and I think this book will expose new perspectives of schooling for Blacks in grade school. I have personally experienced this before and I think it will be a good experience for readers to be "updated" and understand that people in other places, across the country, go through such tough times in their daily routines, especially school.
It was nice to hear your opinions about the topics that Morris put into their book considering you had such a huge change, moving from North Carolina to New Hampshire, when it comes to the diversity and treatment of people who are not White.
ReplyDeleteI like the format of the book, well the small bits I see. It sounds like it really helps the reader to understand what the author is try to convey.
Do you think that the authoring giving first hand experience and knowledge about how young African American women are treat helps you understand the topic more?
Thanks so much for the kind words!
DeleteAnswering your question, I think it really did help me to understand the topic more. Just how we write a "hook" for our essays, I think this author did a good job drawing my attention in the first chapter by approaching different African American girls from different areas in the country. I think this chapter was definitely more interesting than I thought it would be. I don't think it would've been this interesting if she didn't interview different girls.
This was a very unique blog post because you chose multiple passages to respond to. However, I was a little confused because I wasn't sure if you were analyzing rhetorical strategies, comparing your passages to current day, mixing all of the choices, or if it was meant to be your free choice blog. Although what you were responding to was a bit unclear, I thought your responses were very good. I especially liked when you compared your life in North Carolina to your life in New Hampshire and then to the struggles black girls faced in Pushout. I completely agree with you saying that it is hard for students in New Hampshire, at least at our school, to understand the reality of these issues. Overall your responses are good, but you said in your analysis of the first passage that Morris was trying to explain something, but then you never went into depth about what Morris was trying to explain. What do you think the purpose of Pushout is?
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ReplyDeleteI really like your first blog! I thought your analysis of each quote was very insightful. One thing that particularly caught my attention was when you mentioned how people in NH may have a harder time noticing racial issues because it is predominately white. I feel like if you live in a racially homogenous area you aren't going to be exposed to much of any conflicting situation related to race. And I find that very interesting. Coming from a diverse town in CA to a state that is 93% white, it is definitely a huge change. One may even call it a culture shock. One of the most noticeable changes is the classroom demographics. At my old school, I would find myself in a classroom with Hispanics, Asians, and Indians. There were even times where there were less white people than colored people. But now, living in Hopkinton, I mostly find myself the only Asian in my class. I'm not necessarily saying it is a bad thing. It's just very different. What is the biggest adjustment or change for you? How diverse the school that you went to in NC?
-Maxine Asmussen
Grace, good use of personal opinions and experiences to develop your responses. The focus of the post could be a bit more clear, but you've chosen good passages and responded to them well. Work on the flow of ideas a bit more.
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